Tena Koe Angus, I am Joshua from Edmund Hillary School. I really like how you have made teleportation and teleported him from Earth to another dimension but my question is why have you made another person go to Earth instead of the person who went in the portal?
I like the way you did your pictures and you did and the bubbles and you did the words. you did really good work on everything I like it all. next time you could add more words to it.
Tena koe Angus, Im June. I really liked your slideshow. I liked when there was a portal that sent you to mars. It was really funny and creative.
ReplyDeleteTena Koe Angus, I am Joshua from Edmund Hillary School. I really like how you have made teleportation and teleported him from Earth to another dimension but my question is why have you made another person go to Earth instead of the person who went in the portal?
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did your pictures and you did and the bubbles and you did the words. you did really good work on everything I like it all. next
ReplyDeletetime you could add more words to it.